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I did a simple to-do application for native Javascript. This is my first time, previously I used only jQuery. What recommendations would be useful?

https://codepen.io/denibudeyko/pen/MWyEmox

(function(window) {
  'use strict';

  // Initial Const 
  const input = document.getElementsByClassName('new-todo')[0]
  const todoList = document.getElementsByClassName('todo-list')[0]
  const items = document.querySelectorAll('.todo-list li')
  const clear = document.querySelector('.clear-completed')
  const todoCount = document.querySelector('.todo-count strong')

  // Add new task
  input.addEventListener('keyup', function(e) {

    var string = input.value;

    if (e.key == 'Enter') {
      const li = document.createElement('li')
      li.innerHTML = `
                    <div class="view">
                        <input class="toggle" type="checkbox" />
                        <label>${string}</label>
                        <button class="destroy"></button>
                    </div>
                    <input class="edit" value="${string}">
                `;

      todoList.appendChild(li);
      const childrenItem = li.querySelector('input.toggle')

      childrenItem.addEventListener('click', event => {
        toggleTaskStatusEvent(event.target)
      })

      input.value = '';
      updateCount();
    }
  })

  function updateCount() {
    todoCount.textContent = document.querySelectorAll('.todo-list li:not(.completed)').length;
  }

  updateCount()


  // Toggle Status
  document.querySelectorAll('.todo-list li').forEach(item => {

    const toggleCheckbox = item.querySelector('input.toggle')
    toggleCheckbox.addEventListener('click', event => {
      toggleTaskStatusEvent(event.target)
    })
  })

  // ToggleTaskStatus
  function toggleTaskStatusEvent(e) {
    const liParent = e.closest('li')
    liParent.classList.toggle('completed')
    updateCount()
  }

  clear.addEventListener('click', function() {
    document.querySelectorAll('.todo-list li.completed').forEach(item => {
      item.remove()
    })
  })

  // FiltersButtons
  document.querySelectorAll('ul.filters li').forEach(item => {
    const filterButton = item.children[0];
    filterButton.addEventListener('click', event => {
      runFilter(event.target)
    })
  })

  // Function Filter
  function runFilter(item) {
    const notCompletedItemsFilter = document.querySelectorAll('.todo-list li:not(.completed)')
    const completedItemsFilter = document.querySelectorAll('.todo-list li.completed')
    const allItemsFilter = document.querySelectorAll('.todo-list li');

    var href = item.getAttribute('href')
    href = href.split('#/')[1]

    const activeButton = document.querySelector('ul.filters a.selected')
    activeButton.classList.remove('selected')
    item.classList.add("selected")

    if (href == 'active') {

      notCompletedItemsFilter.forEach(item => {
        item.style.display = 'block';
      })
      completedItemsFilter.forEach(item => {
        item.style.display = 'none';
      })

    } else if (href == 'completed') {
      notCompletedItemsFilter.forEach(item => {
        item.style.display = 'none';
      })
      completedItemsFilter.forEach(item => {
        item.style.display = 'block';
      })
    } else if (href == 'all') {
      allItemsFilter.forEach(item => {
        item.style.display = 'block'
      })
    }
  }

  // Edit Task Double click
  items.forEach(item => {
    item.addEventListener('dblclick', event => {
      editTask(item)
    })
  })

  // Edit Task
  function editTask(item) {
    var label = item.querySelector('label');
    var editButton = item.querySelector('.edit')
    editButton.style.display = 'block'

    editButton.addEventListener('keyup', function(event) {
      label.textContent = this.value
      if (event.key == 'Enter') {
        this.style.display = 'none';
      }
    })
  }

  // Function Remove Task
  items.forEach(item => {
    item.querySelector('.destroy').addEventListener('click', function(event) {
      item.remove()
      updateCount();
    })
  })
})(window);
.todo-list li .toggle {
  cursor: pointer;
}

html,
body {
  margin: 0;
  padding: 0;
}

button {
  margin: 0;
  padding: 0;
  border: 0;
  background: none;
  font-size: 100%;
  vertical-align: baseline;
  font-family: inherit;
  font-weight: inherit;
  color: inherit;
  -webkit-appearance: none;
  appearance: none;
  -webkit-font-smoothing: antialiased;
  -moz-osx-font-smoothing: grayscale;
}

body {
  font: 14px 'Helvetica Neue', Helvetica, Arial, sans-serif;
  line-height: 1.4em;
  background: #f5f5f5;
  color: #4d4d4d;
  min-width: 230px;
  max-width: 550px;
  margin: 0 auto;
  -webkit-font-smoothing: antialiased;
  -moz-osx-font-smoothing: grayscale;
  font-weight: 300;
}

 :focus {
  outline: 0;
}

.hidden {
  display: none;
}

.todoapp {
  background: #fff;
  margin: 130px 0 40px 0;
  position: relative;
  box-shadow: 0 2px 4px 0 rgba(0, 0, 0, 0.2), 0 25px 50px 0 rgba(0, 0, 0, 0.1);
}

.todoapp input::-webkit-input-placeholder {
  font-style: italic;
  font-weight: 300;
  color: #e6e6e6;
}

.todoapp input::-moz-placeholder {
  font-style: italic;
  font-weight: 300;
  color: #e6e6e6;
}

.todoapp input::input-placeholder {
  font-style: italic;
  font-weight: 300;
  color: #e6e6e6;
}

.todoapp h1 {
  position: absolute;
  top: -155px;
  width: 100%;
  font-size: 100px;
  font-weight: 100;
  text-align: center;
  color: rgba(175, 47, 47, 0.15);
  -webkit-text-rendering: optimizeLegibility;
  -moz-text-rendering: optimizeLegibility;
  text-rendering: optimizeLegibility;
}

.new-todo,
.edit {
  position: relative;
  margin: 0;
  width: 100%;
  font-size: 24px;
  font-family: inherit;
  font-weight: inherit;
  line-height: 1.4em;
  border: 0;
  color: inherit;
  padding: 6px;
  border: 1px solid #999;
  box-shadow: inset 0 -1px 5px 0 rgba(0, 0, 0, 0.2);
  box-sizing: border-box;
  -webkit-font-smoothing: antialiased;
  -moz-osx-font-smoothing: grayscale;
}

.new-todo {
  padding: 16px 16px 16px 60px;
  border: none;
  background: rgba(0, 0, 0, 0.003);
  box-shadow: inset 0 -2px 1px rgba(0, 0, 0, 0.03);
}

.main {
  position: relative;
  z-index: 2;
  border-top: 1px solid #e6e6e6;
}

.toggle-all {
  width: 1px;
  height: 1px;
  border: none;
  /* Mobile Safari */
  opacity: 0;
  position: absolute;
  right: 100%;
  bottom: 100%;
}

.toggle-all+label {
  width: 60px;
  height: 34px;
  font-size: 0;
  position: absolute;
  top: -52px;
  left: -13px;
  -webkit-transform: rotate(90deg);
  transform: rotate(90deg);
}

.toggle-all+label:before {
  content: '❯';
  font-size: 22px;
  color: #e6e6e6;
  padding: 10px 27px 10px 27px;
}

.toggle-all:checked+label:before {
  color: #737373;
}

.todo-list {
  margin: 0;
  padding: 0;
  list-style: none;
}

.todo-list li {
  position: relative;
  font-size: 24px;
  border-bottom: 1px solid #ededed;
}

.todo-list li:last-child {
  border-bottom: none;
}

.todo-list li.editing {
  border-bottom: none;
  padding: 0;
}

.todo-list li.editing .edit {
  display: block;
  width: 506px;
  padding: 12px 16px;
  margin: 0 0 0 43px;
}

.todo-list li.editing .view {
  display: none;
}

.todo-list li .toggle {
  text-align: center;
  width: 40px;
  /* auto, since non-WebKit browsers doesn't support input styling */
  height: auto;
  position: absolute;
  top: 0;
  bottom: 0;
  margin: auto 0;
  border: none;
  /* Mobile Safari */
  -webkit-appearance: none;
  appearance: none;
}

.todo-list li .toggle {
  opacity: 0;
}

.todo-list li .toggle+label {
  /*
            Firefox requires `#` to be escaped - https://bugzilla.mozilla.org/show_bug.cgi?id=922433
            IE and Edge requires *everything* to be escaped to render, so we do that instead of just the `#` - https://developer.microsoft.com/en-us/microsoft-edge/platform/issues/7157459/
        */
  background-image: url('data:image/svg+xml;utf8,%3Csvg%20xmlns%3D%22http%3A//www.w3.org/2000/svg%22%20width%3D%2240%22%20height%3D%2240%22%20viewBox%3D%22-10%20-18%20100%20135%22%3E%3Ccircle%20cx%3D%2250%22%20cy%3D%2250%22%20r%3D%2250%22%20fill%3D%22none%22%20stroke%3D%22%23ededed%22%20stroke-width%3D%223%22/%3E%3C/svg%3E');
  background-repeat: no-repeat;
  background-position: center left;
}

.todo-list li .toggle:checked+label {
  background-image: url('data:image/svg+xml;utf8,%3Csvg%20xmlns%3D%22http%3A//www.w3.org/2000/svg%22%20width%3D%2240%22%20height%3D%2240%22%20viewBox%3D%22-10%20-18%20100%20135%22%3E%3Ccircle%20cx%3D%2250%22%20cy%3D%2250%22%20r%3D%2250%22%20fill%3D%22none%22%20stroke%3D%22%23bddad5%22%20stroke-width%3D%223%22/%3E%3Cpath%20fill%3D%22%235dc2af%22%20d%3D%22M72%2025L42%2071%2027%2056l-4%204%2020%2020%2034-52z%22/%3E%3C/svg%3E');
}

.todo-list li label {
  word-break: break-all;
  padding: 15px 15px 15px 60px;
  display: block;
  line-height: 1.2;
  transition: color 0.4s;
}

.todo-list li.completed label {
  color: #d9d9d9;
  text-decoration: line-through;
}

.todo-list li .destroy {
  display: none;
  position: absolute;
  top: 0;
  right: 10px;
  bottom: 0;
  width: 40px;
  height: 40px;
  margin: auto 0;
  font-size: 30px;
  color: #cc9a9a;
  margin-bottom: 11px;
  transition: color 0.2s ease-out;
}

.todo-list li .destroy:hover {
  color: #af5b5e;
}

.todo-list li .destroy:after {
  content: '×';
}

.todo-list li:hover .destroy {
  display: block;
}

.todo-list li .edit {
  display: none;
}

.todo-list li.editing:last-child {
  margin-bottom: -1px;
}

.footer {
  color: #777;
  padding: 10px 15px;
  height: 20px;
  text-align: center;
  border-top: 1px solid #e6e6e6;
}

.footer:before {
  content: '';
  position: absolute;
  right: 0;
  bottom: 0;
  left: 0;
  height: 50px;
  overflow: hidden;
  box-shadow: 0 1px 1px rgba(0, 0, 0, 0.2), 0 8px 0 -3px #f6f6f6, 0 9px 1px -3px rgba(0, 0, 0, 0.2), 0 16px 0 -6px #f6f6f6, 0 17px 2px -6px rgba(0, 0, 0, 0.2);
}

.todo-count {
  float: left;
  text-align: left;
}

.todo-count strong {
  font-weight: 300;
}

.filters {
  margin: 0;
  padding: 0;
  list-style: none;
  position: absolute;
  right: 0;
  left: 0;
}

.filters li {
  display: inline;
}

.filters li a {
  color: inherit;
  margin: 3px;
  padding: 3px 7px;
  text-decoration: none;
  border: 1px solid transparent;
  border-radius: 3px;
}

.filters li a:hover {
  border-color: rgba(175, 47, 47, 0.1);
}

.filters li a.selected {
  border-color: rgba(175, 47, 47, 0.2);
}

.clear-completed,
html .clear-completed:active {
  float: right;
  position: relative;
  line-height: 20px;
  text-decoration: none;
  cursor: pointer;
}

.clear-completed:hover {
  text-decoration: underline;
}

.info {
  margin: 65px auto 0;
  color: #bfbfbf;
  font-size: 10px;
  text-shadow: 0 1px 0 rgba(255, 255, 255, 0.5);
  text-align: center;
}

.info p {
  line-height: 1;
}

.info a {
  color: inherit;
  text-decoration: none;
  font-weight: 400;
}

.info a:hover {
  text-decoration: underline;
}


/*
        Hack to remove background from Mobile Safari.
        Can't use it globally since it destroys checkboxes in Firefox
    */

@media screen and (-webkit-min-device-pixel-ratio:0) {
  .toggle-all,
  .todo-list li .toggle {
    background: none;
  }
  .todo-list li .toggle {
    height: 40px;
  }
}

@media (max-width: 430px) {
  .footer {
    height: 50px;
  }
  .filters {
    bottom: 10px;
  }
}

hr {
  margin: 20px 0;
  border: 0;
  border-top: 1px dashed #c5c5c5;
  border-bottom: 1px dashed #f7f7f7;
}

.learn a {
  font-weight: normal;
  text-decoration: none;
  color: #b83f45;
}

.learn a:hover {
  text-decoration: underline;
  color: #787e7e;
}

.learn h3,
.learn h4,
.learn h5 {
  margin: 10px 0;
  font-weight: 500;
  line-height: 1.2;
  color: #000;
}

.learn h3 {
  font-size: 24px;
}

.learn h4 {
  font-size: 18px;
}

.learn h5 {
  margin-bottom: 0;
  font-size: 14px;
}

.learn ul {
  padding: 0;
  margin: 0 0 30px 25px;
}

.learn li {
  line-height: 20px;
}

.learn p {
  font-size: 15px;
  font-weight: 300;
  line-height: 1.3;
  margin-top: 0;
  margin-bottom: 0;
}

#issue-count {
  display: none;
}

.quote {
  border: none;
  margin: 20px 0 60px 0;
}

.quote p {
  font-style: italic;
}

.quote p:before {
  content: '“';
  font-size: 50px;
  opacity: .15;
  position: absolute;
  top: -20px;
  left: 3px;
}

.quote p:after {
  content: '”';
  font-size: 50px;
  opacity: .15;
  position: absolute;
  bottom: -42px;
  right: 3px;
}

.quote footer {
  position: absolute;
  bottom: -40px;
  right: 0;
}

.quote footer img {
  border-radius: 3px;
}

.quote footer a {
  margin-left: 5px;
  vertical-align: middle;
}

.speech-bubble {
  position: relative;
  padding: 10px;
  background: rgba(0, 0, 0, .04);
  border-radius: 5px;
}

.speech-bubble:after {
  content: '';
  position: absolute;
  top: 100%;
  right: 30px;
  border: 13px solid transparent;
  border-top-color: rgba(0, 0, 0, .04);
}

.learn-bar>.learn {
  position: absolute;
  width: 272px;
  top: 8px;
  left: -300px;
  padding: 10px;
  border-radius: 5px;
  background-color: rgba(255, 255, 255, .6);
  transition-property: left;
  transition-duration: 500ms;
}

@media (min-width: 899px) {
  .learn-bar {
    width: auto;
    padding-left: 300px;
  }
  .learn-bar>.learn {
    left: 8px;
  }
}

.destroy {
  cursor: pointer;
}
<!-- <link rel="stylesheet" href="node_modules/todomvc-common/base.css"> -->
<!-- <link rel="stylesheet" href="node_modules/todomvc-app-css/index.css"> -->

<section class="todoapp">
  <header class="header">
    <h1>todos</h1>
    <input class="new-todo" placeholder="What needs to be done?" autofocus>
  </header>
  <!-- This section should be hidden by default and shown when there are todos -->
  <section class="main">
    <input id="toggle-all" class="toggle-all" type="checkbox">
    <label for="toggle-all">Mark all as complete</label>
    <ul class="todo-list">
      <!-- These are here just to show the structure of the list items -->
      <!-- List items should get the class `editing` when editing and `completed` when marked as completed -->
      <li class='completed'>
        <div class="view">
          <input class="toggle" checked type="checkbox">
          <label>Taste JavaScript</label>
          <button class="destroy"></button>
        </div>
        <input class="edit" value="Taste JavaScript">
      </li>
      <li>
        <div class="view">
          <input class="toggle" type="checkbox">
          <label>Refactoring Code</label>
          <button class="destroy"></button>
        </div>
        <input class="edit" value="Refactoring Code">
      </li>
      <li>
        <div class="view">
          <input class="toggle" type="checkbox">
          <label>Rewrite app to react</label>
          <button class="destroy"></button>
        </div>
        <input class="edit" value="Rewrite app to react">
      </li>
    </ul>
  </section>
  <!-- This footer should hidden by default and shown when there are todos -->
  <footer class="footer">
    <!-- This should be `0 items left` by default -->
    <span class="todo-count"><strong>0</strong> item left</span>
    <!-- Remove this if you don't implement routing -->
    <ul class="filters">
      <li>
        <a class="selected" href="#/all">All</a>
      </li>
      <li>
        <a href="#/active">Active</a>
      </li>
      <li>
        <a href="#/completed">Completed</a>
      </li>
    </ul>
    <!-- Hidden if no completed items are left ↓ -->
    <button class="clear-completed">Clear completed</button>
  </footer>
</section>
<footer class="info">
  <p>Double-click to edit a todo</p>
  <p>Enter to add/edit task</p>

</footer>
<!-- Scripts here. Don't remove ↓ -->
<!-- <script src="node_modules/todomvc-common/base.js"></script> -->

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User interaction issue

There is a flaw with the double-click to edit mechanism - it only works for existing items, but for newly added items, the double click handler is not registered. The same is true for the destroy links.

edit not working few new items

Instead of adding a click handler to each list item, event delegation could be used to add a click handler to the list and delegate the editing event to the list item.

JS

selecting elements

I know CertainPerformance has already touched on the code to select elements. For the selection of list items, event delegation could be achieved by converting these lines:

const todoList = document.getElementsByClassName('todo-list')[0]
const items = document.querySelectorAll('.todo-list li')

to this:

const todoList = document.getElementsByClassName('todo-list')[0];
const items = todoList.getElementsByTagName('li'); // <- active collection

Note that getElementsByTagName() returns a live HTMLCollection1 so there is no need to re-query the list after items are added or removed... and to iterate over the items, they can be put into an array using the spread operator:

[...items].forEach(...)

comparison operators

It is recommended by many to use strict equality when comparing values - that way there is no need to have types converted. For example, in this line in runFilter:

if (href == 'active') {

href comes from var href = item.getAttribute('href') and that method returns a string or null. Thus there is no need for type coercion.

Repeated methods to update element display properties

That runFilter function has multiple forEach() loops with arrow functions like this:

item => {
  item.style.display = 'block';
}

The repeated functions could be abstracted to named functions to avoid redundancies.

Additionally, instead of setting the style, the classList methods like add() and remove() could be used instead - with the CSS class hidden.

CSS

There is a ruleset for html and body:

html,
body {
  margin: 0;
  padding: 0;
} 

then later on there is one for body:

body { 

and it has this:

  margin: 0 auto;

That seems excessive... one or both of those could be removed.

margin syntax

The current CSS contains this:

.todoapp {
  background: #fff;
  margin: 130px 0 40px 0;

The margin syntax could be converted from /* top | right | bottom | left */ to /* top | horizontal | bottom */.

  margin: 130px 0 40px;
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You have

const input = document.getElementsByClassName('new-todo')[0]

When selecting only a single element, it's a bit more appropriate and terser to use querySelector instead:

const input = document.querySelector('.new-todo');

I notice that sometimes you're using semicolons, and sometimes you're not. Unless you're an expert, I'd recommend using them, else ASI may trip you up, resulting in hard-to-understand bugs. Consider using a linter to enforce your preferred style.

You have

var string = input.value;
// ...
li.innerHTML = `
    <div class="view">
        <input class="toggle" type="checkbox" />
        <label>${string}</label>
        <button class="destroy"></button>
    </div>
    <input class="edit" value="${string}">
`;

Don't concatenate HTML strings from user input; if the user accidentally uses characters with HTML syntax, like <, this can result in a unexpected appearance and unexpected elements in the DOM. It can also run arbitrary code, which could be a security risk (imagine if another user said: "Try putting this in as a todo input, you won't believe what happens next!" and then the victim gets their login info stolen).

Instead, once you have a reference to the container of the text, assign to the container's textContent:

var string = input.value;

if (e.key == 'Enter') {
  const li = document.createElement('li')
  li.innerHTML = `
      <div class="view">
          <input class="toggle" type="checkbox" />
          <label></label>
          <button class="destroy"></button>
      </div>
      <input class="edit" value="${string}">
  `;
  li.querySelector('label').textContent = string;

You have a var there, but you're also using const. If you're going to write in ES2015 with const and let, that's great - but, best to use it everywhere. (If you're writing in ES2015, never use var. Linting rule)

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