like @Greg said in his commentcomment - you can make it really short with LINQ and you don't have to check any ranges:
static IEnumerable<T> Remove<T>(this IEnumerable<T> items, int startIndex, int count)
{
return
count > 0
? items.TakeWhile((x, i) => i < startIndex).Concat(items.Skip(startIndex + count))
: items.TakeWhile((x, i) => i < (startIndex + count + 1)).Concat(items.Skip(startIndex + 1));
}